assasin I've heard worse
I gave it a 3 because you have a decent style. You really should work on clarity but then again I don't know if you have a decent recording program either so just do the best with what you have. Check out my entry (whenver it freakin decides to show up) called "Wake Up". I hope it can inspire you =).
-Will (I'm Whack-a-mole on NG)
